In some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to fight this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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children

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who eat excessive amounts of fast

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are diagnosed with

obesity

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in some nations. Some people regard

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canteens

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prohibiting selling them as the best solution to tackle

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problem. I partially disagree with

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, for it is the individual responsibility to choose what people should eat in spite of their improving health conditions when schools stop selling fast

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. On one hand, banning fast

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at

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canteens

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is effective in promoting the well-being of

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, they are encouraged to consume more healthy products based on fresh vegetables and fruits without any choice of instant

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which often becomes a primary cause for overweight.

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, the amount of sugar, salt and chemical additives included in hamburgers and pizza is so extreme, leading to various kinds of disease and higher risks of

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.

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can pose a detrimental impact on those who go through a significant stage of development.

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, getting rid of all these unhealthy diets from

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canteens

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is recommended to promote healthy eating habits among

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on a regular basis.

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, it is not a complete solution to reduce

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unless each student should learn to make a healthy choice themselves. Indeed, they are required to consider the very effects that each

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has on them

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the serious consequences of the frequent intake of readily made products.

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, the understanding that consuming too

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calories raises the risks of

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and dangerous problems

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as heart attack and brain strokes allows

children

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to have a great responsibility in selecting the kind of

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they eat for a lifetime.

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of removing fast

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from

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, education plays a more significant role in raising their awareness toward

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and health and increasing a sense of suspicion toward

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, which encourages

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to distinguish healthy diets from unhealthy ones on their own. In conclusion, I somewhat disagree that

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canteens

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should stop providing fast

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it certainly encourages healthy eating habits among

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, it will not be a dependable solution to prevent their overweight because of the declining sense of their own responsibility in choosing healthy diets.