The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.

The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.
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There are two tables which have been done for investigation, where one of them illustrates data about
a
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proportion of Japanese tourists travelling in other countries during 1985-1995 and the second one provides information about the percentage of Japanese visits to Australia
accordingly
.
To begin
, as
it
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apply
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can be demonstrated there was an enormous rise in the tourism sector in
Japan
during
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10 years from 1985. As a matter of fact, the number of Japanese travellers was around 5 million citizens in 1985, which
then
tripled and reached an indicator equal to 15 million people.
Moreover
, it is essential to reveal that some people from
Japan
started to prefer travelling to Australia mostly in the period starting from 1990 till 1993, around 6 per cent of citizens of
Japan
,
while
there we lowest percentage of visits to Australia at the beginning of 1985. In summary, it is important to analyze and note that the tourism direction in the economy of
Japan
has developed sharply and the government provided a good strategy to improve
this
sector.
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