Presented in the two maps is information pertaining to changes that have occurred at Lynwich College from 2006 until the present day.
From an observational perspective, a noticeable transformation has been made, including the construction of more transportation and entertainment facilities.
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, the two college buildings stayed the same throughout the timeline.
Beginning with the north-western part of the map, where it used to be a woodland, a part of it has been cleared to make way for a path leading to the centre of the school. Regarding the
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, there was an addition of a bus stop adjacent to the existing road,
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half of the car park was demolished to build a bike storage.
Moving onto the south-east, a sports centre was built on the location of the 2006 library, resulting in a reduction in
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of the sports field. The new library was constructed at the place between the two college buildings, where there used to be trees, at the
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corner. A final point of interest is that there was a replacement of the T-junction with a cafeteria in the middle of the school.
