The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The chart below
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equipments
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types of equipment
pieces of equipment
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utilized for doing chairs in different households of a nation from 1920 to 2019
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, it can be seen that the number of households that acquire electrical essentials rose considerably throughout the timeline, Linking Words
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the most used appliance in 1920 at exactly 40 Change the verb form
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increased considerably to nearly double the previous figures at approximately 78 Linking Words
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refrigerator was the least popular electrical kitchen device, nearly 21 Add a comma
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a fridge in 1920 but the figures rocketed to 50 times its original amount of consumers at 100%. in 1980 which remained the same Wrong verb form
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at the end
of the timeline.
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it plummeted to 20 Correct your spelling
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the latter figure dropped gradually to almost 10 Add a comma
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