There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a well-established

fact

that

globalization

has benefited the

world

because it managed to bring together

people

, businesses and nations throughout the

world

.

However

, despite the advantages of

globalization

some

people

are against

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it, and

this

may lead to a slower pace of progress. And I completely agree with

this

idea. There are two principal reasons for

this

. One point that I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the

fact

that there are a lot of poor countries that managed to improve their economy. And

therefore

, the

world

economy can

also

, benefit from the

fact

that the cultures around the

world

are getting more and more similar.

However

, there are some economies in the

world

that cannot benefit from

globalization

, like some countries in Africa. Adding

further

credibility to the statement brings to an idea of the decrease in monopoly in countries. And

this

leads to the

fact

that more

people

can successfully realise their business ideas.

This

means that not just

world

economies but individuals can benefit from

globalization

. Turning to the other side of the argument, one of the main drawbacks of

globalization

is the

fact

cultures become more and more similar. What I mean by

this

is that cultures are not so diverse anymore. Putting it in a nutshell, by taking into account all the above-mentioned reasons, I once again reaffirm my position that

globalization

is an essential part of economic growth

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thanks to

globalization

more

people

are able to realise their ideas, and

due to

this

reason more workplaces are available for

people

.