The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts illustrate the statistics on

Canadian's

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and

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citizens

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citizens'

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marital status.

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can be seen that the majority of the population in both

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are married. The Canadian witnessed

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proportion of separated but not divorced,

whereas

most of the

Australian

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Australians

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lives

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live

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together with

their spouses.

To begin

with, the largest proportion of people in Canada and Australia are married, contributing well over 80%.

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, roughly 50% of the Canadian couple no longer live together, higher than the married 20%.

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, just under 50% of

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Australian

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still married, Canada experiences

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marriage at 3%,

while

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apply

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Australia has none. Moving on to people who

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living alone, In both countries, these people account for less than a tenth in each

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Topic Vocabulary:

marital status
population
pie charts
percentage
categories
Married
Single
Divorced
Widowed
distribution
noticeable trends
comparison
significantly different
similarities
striking differences

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