The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the statistics on
Canadian's
and Change noun form
Canadian
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Australian's
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Australian
citizens
marital status. Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
Overall
, it Linking Words
is
can be seen that the majority of the population in both Unnecessary verb
apply
country
are married. The Canadian witnessed Change to a plural noun
countries
significant
proportion of separated but not divorced, Correct article usage
a significant
whereas
most of the Linking Words
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Australian
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Australians
lives
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live
together with
their spouses.
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To begin
with, the largest proportion of people in Canada and Australia are married, contributing well over 80%. Linking Words
However
, roughly 50% of the Canadian couple no longer live together, higher than the married 20%. Linking Words
In contrast
, just under 50% of Linking Words
the
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apply
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Australian
still married, Canada experiences Correct your spelling
Australians
same sex
marriage at 3%, Add a hyphen
same-sex
while
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the
Australia has none.
Moving on to people who Correct article usage
apply
is
living alone, In both countries, these people account for less than a tenth in each Change the verb form
are
categories
. Change to a singular noun
category
While
Canada shows Linking Words
higher
fraction Correct article usage
a higher
in
single and widowed status, Change preposition
of
the
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apply
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Australian
Fix the agreement mistake
Australians
is
more likely to be divorced, with 2% of the population.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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