The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking the visitors how satisfied they were with their visit , during the same two period.
The table illustrates information about the number of
visitors
to Ashdown Museum
throughout the whole year
before and the year
after it was improved. Also
, charts show the results of questionnaires asking visitor’s opinions on how good their service was during the same two periods.
Overall
, after the museum
's refurbishment the total number of visitors
increased. Moreover
, their response was more positive. The year
before their refurbishment 74000 people
visited Ashdown However
, the year
after the development 92000 people
came to the museum
.
Before the development, most of the visitors
said that they were dissatisfied with their tour in
the Change preposition
of
museum
. Moreover
, 10 percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
visitors
were very dissatisfied. After their refurbishment, the percentage of very satisfied people
increased from 15% to 35%.
Additionally
, there has been no change in the percentage of people
who gave no response. Also
, the percentage of very dissatisfied people
had a huge change. It decreased by 30%.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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