The parents of your Australian friend chris have invited to you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your LETTER say why you think chris will enjoy the surprise party. Explain why you won’t be able to attend the party. Give details of a plan to see chris at a different time.
Dear Mr & Miss Collins,
I hope you find
this
letter in good health. I am glad that you are organizing a surprise party for Chris and would have loved to attend it, but unfortunately
I won’t be able to make it as I have to fulfil a few commitments at work. Let me explain Add a comma
unfortunately,
you
in more detail.
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to you
Firstly
, I am sure Chris will be amused by this
surprise party. This
is because I have learnt that you have invited all our college friends from around the world for this
amazing get together
. Chris was longing to meet all of them and Add a hyphen
get-together
this
party would make it possible.
On the other hand
, I won’t be able to celebrate with all of you has
I am the team leader of an important project at my organization. I am leading a team of 20 people and Correct your spelling
as
this
project is a stepping stone in my career as a software developer. Moreover
, the deadline of this
project coincides with that of the
Chris’s birthday. I hope you will be able to empathize with my predicament.
At the same time, I planning a surprise visit Remove the article
apply
at
Chris’s golf tournament next month in Sydney. I am assured that he Change preposition
to
would
be excited to see me there. I hope to make his day memorable by gifting him a luxury watch that I had purchased for him from Paris.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Your’s sincerely,
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