The parents of your Australian friend chris have invited to you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your LETTER say why you think chris will enjoy the surprise party. Explain why you won’t be able to attend the party. Give details of a plan to see chris at a different time.

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Dear Mr & Miss Collins, I hope you find

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letter in good health. I am glad that you are organizing a surprise party for Chris and would have loved to attend it, but

unfortunately

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I won’t be able to make it as I have to fulfil a few commitments at work. Let me explain

you

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in more detail.

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, I am sure Chris will be amused by

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surprise party.

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is because I have learnt that you have invited all our college friends from around the world for

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amazing

get together

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. Chris was longing to meet all of them and

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party would make it possible.

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, I won’t be able to celebrate with all of you

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I am the team leader of an important project at my organization. I am leading a team of 20 people and

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project is a stepping stone in my career as a software developer.

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, the deadline of

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project coincides with that of

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Chris’s birthday. I hope you will be able to empathize with my predicament. At the same time, I planning a surprise visit

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Chris’s golf tournament next month in Sydney. I am assured that he

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be excited to see me there. I hope to make his day memorable by gifting him a luxury watch that I had purchased for him from Paris. I am looking forward to your reply. Your’s sincerely, Nirav

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Task Achievement

In your introduction, directly address the reason for writing to make your purpose clear from the beginning.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure you are varying your sentence structures to demonstrate flexibility and range in your writing.

Coherence and Cohesion

Remember to check for any minor spelling or grammar mistakes to maintain the professionalism of your letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter is well-organized with a logical structure, enhancing its coherence.

Task Achievement

The tone of your letter is appropriate for the context, achieving the task effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion

You developed each paragraph with a single idea, which aids clarity and cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

242 words

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