The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pie charts illustrate the statistics on
an
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the
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annual income sources and
spendings
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spending
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of a USA charity for children.
Overall
, it can be seen that a substantial proportion of the revenue comes from donated food,
whereas
this
children’s charity allocates a significant amount of money on programmes
services
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and services
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.
To begin
with, the largest proportion of the earnings
come
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comes
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from donated food, contributing well over 85%.
This
is followed closely by community contributions which is eight times less than the former.
While
programmed revenue accounts for 2%, the three remaining sources make up less than 0.5%.
On the other hand
,
this
American children’s charity utilises almost all of its money on program services, at about 95% of the expenditures. Fundraising and Management and general together make up less than 5%.
However
, compared to the total of the revenue sources, the total of the expenditures is lower, roughly 200,000 dollars.
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