The chart below gives information about the revenue of A&V Teach Company from 200 to 2004.

The chart below gives information about the revenue of A&V Teach Company from 200 to 2004.
The bar chart illustrates the
sales
figures for three distinct categories of technology products—
laptops
,
smartphones
, and cameras—over the period spanning from 2000 to 2004.
Sales
data is presented in terms of revenue in US
million
dollars
.
Overall
, despite fluctuations and temporary setbacks, all three product categories exhibited a general upward trend in
sales
over the five-year period.
However
, it is noteworthy that
smartphones
and cameras experienced brief periods of zero
sales
or losses in 2020 and 2021, respectively. Remarkably,
laptops
consistently emerged as the highest revenue-generating product category each year.
Laptops
commenced the period with
sales
nearing 4
million
US
dollars
, representing the sole contributor to positive cash flow
initially
.
Subsequently
, laptop
sales
witnessed a slight decline to approximately 3
million
dollars
in 2021, before experiencing a steady upward trajectory, culminating in
sales
exceeding 9
million
dollars
by 2024.
This
peak marked the highest recorded income over the span of five decades, underscoring the enduring popularity and market dominance of
laptops
. In stark contrast to
laptops
,
smartphones
and cameras commenced
sales
from significantly lower bases,
initially
lagging behind in revenue generation.
However
, both product categories gradually gained momentum and profitability over the years.
Smartphones
,
for instance
, surged from a negative
sales
figure of around minus 1
million
dollars
to surpass the 2
million
mark by 2003, despite experiencing a slight downturn in the subsequent year.
Similarly
, cameras began generating revenue in 2002 and exhibited a steady ascent, reaching
sales
figures just shy of 4
million
dollars
by 2004
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