You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite him/her to visit your house someday
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Dear Mr Smith
The reason I am writing to you is to inform you of the graduation party that will take place next Saturday.
To begin
with, I want to explain that I am graduating tomorrow and I want to celebrate it with my classmates. There will be up to 50 people. To clarify, we are planning to have an outdoor barbecue and pool party. I assure you, there will not be any problems, moreover
, I can take responsibility for every guest's behaviour.
Consequently
, I want to apologise in advance if the music bothers you, it will not be too loud. My friends are kind and well-mannered. However
, it is impossible to have a party and be quiet, but I hope for your understanding. I know all the laws and those that prohibit making noise after 10pm.
Additionally
, I would like to invite you to visit my mother. She said she had not seen you for long. Just let me know, and I will tell her to bake some biscuits for you.
Thank you in advance
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Task Achievement
Try to directly invite your neighbor to the graduation party as well, to make your letter more inclusive and directly address the invitation aspect of the task.
Coherence & Cohesion
It's beneficial to structure your paragraphs in a way that each one deals with a specific aspect of your letter. Consider starting with an introduction, then moving to the announcement of the event, followed by the apology, and finally ending with the invitation. This helps in maintaining strong logical progression throughout.
Writing Tone
Your letter has a polite and friendly tone, which is perfectly suited for the context of writing to a neighbor. Well done on capturing a suitable writing tone!
Paragraph Usage
You've effectively used paragraphs to separate different ideas, which aids in the overall clarity and understanding of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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