Describe a good advertisement that you think is useful You should say: - Where you can see it - What it shows - Why you think it is useful - And explain how you feel about it

Well, I do not like to watch ads anywhere but I cannot avoid
as
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it is everywhere.
While
I watch shows on my phone, there are ads
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that appears
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appears
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in between and usually I skip them but here, I want to talk about an
ad
which was catchy. There is a word used in that
ad
and
it
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apply
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says "
thank
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you
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, mom
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mom
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Mom
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".
This
adis
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is
related to a nestle company of
choclate
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chocolate
shakes.
Therer
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There
is a mom behind a
child
in that advertisement and it shows how a
maother
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mother
encourages her
child
to play football and cricket. She motivates her
child
by giving her
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a nestle
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nestle
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Nestle
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choclate
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chocolate
cup.
Ofcourse
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Of course
the main
moto
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motto
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of the advertisement
to
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is to
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earn money for the company but it really gives a positive message that there is a
mother
who keeps on
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for her
child
. When her
child
is playing in scorchy heat, she is
besides
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her
child
to keep motivating her and when her
child
wins the match she
pour
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her a
nestle
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Nestle
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cup
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of choclate
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choclate
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chocolate
. It is a useful
ad
because it shows
that
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apply
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how important is to have a
mother
in life and it
also
shows
love
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the love
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between a
child
and her
mother
. Whenever I watch
this
ad
it reminds me of my own
mother
and her love towards me and sometimes I think that I am very grateful because I have a
mother
in my life which sometimes I take for granted. In
this
way
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way,
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this
ad
has a positive message towards the public to have a value for their
mother's
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mothers
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and the sacrifices they make for us to
see
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be
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happy.
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Grammar
To further enhance your response, try adding more variety to your sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical skills.
Vocabulary
Consider using more precise vocabulary to better express your thoughts and make your description more vivid.
Task Response
For an even higher score, ensure that all parts of your speech directly relate to the topic of the advertisement's usefulness. Including more details on how the advertisement directly influences behavior or perceptions could strengthen your response.
Coherence & Cohesion
To improve coherence, try linking your ideas more smoothly with transitional phrases that guide the listener through your narrative.
Task Achievement
The description provides a clear response to the prompt, discussing the advertisement’s setting, message, and personal impact.
Coherence & Cohesion
You did well to organize your response with a beginning, middle, and ending, helping to maintain a logical structure throughout.
Task Engagement
Including personal reflections on the ad's impact adds a valuable dimension to your response, making it more engaging and relatable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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