The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph compares the
number
of closures and newly opened Use synonyms
shops
in one country during the 2011 and 2018 years.
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Overall
, Linking Words
while
the rate of openings decreased year by year, the rate of Linking Words
shops
that are closed increased.
Use synonyms
To begin
with opened Linking Words
shops
, the starting point was more than 8000 in 2011, Use synonyms
however
in the next year it sharply decreased to 4000. After some time it started to increase and reached 6000 in 2014, which in 2015 experienced a decline to exactly 4000 and stayed at Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
until 2017. In 2018 it finished with a decrease, where the Use synonyms
number
consisted of 3000.
Meanwhile, as we can see, the closure of Use synonyms
shops
rate in 2011 was more than 6000, approximately 6500, which declined to 6000 in 2012. Use synonyms
Then
it experienced growth to nearly 7100 in 2013. Linking Words
However
, in 2014 it decreased to its starting point, 6500. In 2015, it roundly declined to 500, Linking Words
then
it again rose to 5000 in 2016 and in the end, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
stayed without changes until 2018.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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