The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
numbers
of visitors to Ashdown Museum from the Fix the agreement mistake
number
year
before to the year
after it was refurbished. The two charts compare the consequence
of surveys asking guests how satisfied they were with their journey, during the same periods.
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consequences
Overall
, it is clear that
the total of visitors who were satisfied with their travel between the year
before, and the year
after refurbishment.
It can be seen that the total of tourists decreased sharply who dissatisfied
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were dissatisfied
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with
traveling
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travelling
a
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apply
pie
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the pie
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per cent
In addition
, there was not any alteration for visitors who had no response. In the year
after refurbishment, the number of guests was similar to people who had very satisfied people on 5%.
In the year
before refurbishment, the total of tourists who were extremely dissatisfied was 40% which was the highest proportion in this
chart. However
, after that period, the highest proportion altered from dissatisfying to satisfying in that construction.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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