You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite him/her to visit your house someday

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Dear Sir, Greetings, I hope you and your family are in good health, I am writing

this

letter to you just to inform you that I have a graduation party next Saturday night, and I have invited my classmates to celebrate with me at an outdoor barbecue party.

Firstly

, I would like to express my apologies for any inconvenience

may

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happen because of

this

event,

additionally

, the loud music that will come out from the speakers. If I had another place to celebrate the party, I would go there for sure. By the way, I would like to invite you to visit my home one day when you have an opportunity, it will be great to have a cup of coffee together and discuss our

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recent issues. Thanks for your understanding. Yours sincerely, Matt Warso

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Sentence Variety

Consider varying your sentence structure to add complexity and interest. This can elevate the sophistication of your writing.

Specific Details

You might benefit from providing a few more details about the event, such as the time it starts, to fully inform the reader.

Structure

Your letter has a clear structure, with an appropriate greeting, introduction of the event, an apology, an invitation, and a polite closing, which is excellent for reader understanding.

Tone

The tone you used is quite suitable for the context; it's polite, considerate, and reflects well on your intentions toward your neighbor, which is commendable.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

136 words

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