You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Dear John,
Hopefully, you guys are in great spirits! My apologies for not being in touch with you all, but I am making up for it via
this
letter, at least I hope so! It is great news that finally
, you are thinking for
driving.
Change preposition
about
Driving
license is not only a way to drive but it Correct article usage
A driving
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
give
driving skills which is essential in today's era. If you remember, when I came to Canada 3 years back, I was struggling a lot with public transport and in frustration, I used to say that I should buy a car as soon as possible. Believe me, Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
last
year I got my license and since that
my travelling life Add a comma
that,
is
more peaceful.
Nowadays, in Toronto city you can find Wrong verb form
has been
driving
school Correct article usage
a driving
each
intersection but here I would highly recommend Change preposition
at each
yiu
City Driving Correct your spelling
the Yuu
Acedemy
which is on Yonge Correct your spelling
Academy
street
near Capitalize word
Street
to
Eglinton station. My other friends and I had a top-notch experience with them, so join their school.
Remember, It is a lifelong Change preposition
apply
skills
which will support your everyday life, so do not take classes in a rush. When you find that confidence Change the noun form
skill
then
book your License exam otherwise
do extra practice. I hope my
all Correct pronoun usage
apply
above
suggestions will make your decision easy.
Love,
GarimaCorrect article usage
the above
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Tone Adjustment
Try to maintain a more consistent and formal tone throughout your letter. While it's informal, ensuring a balance between friendliness and formality can enhance clarity and effectiveness.
Detail Enhancement
When recommending a driving school, it might be useful to include a bit more detail about why it's recommended. For instance, mention specific aspects like the quality of instructors, the driving school's success rate, or any personal anecdotes of progress and improvement.
Proofreading
Proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and typos to improve overall clarity and professionalism.
Logical Structure
Your letter does an excellent job of structuring thoughts, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing different points, and a succinct conclusion.
Persuasiveness
The personal anecdotes and reasonings you included for why a driving license is advantageous lend a very persuasive and relatable tone to your letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,