thr table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of Britain. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed
The given table and piece chart illustrate the financial situation and the proportion expended by the police in each area of the United Kingdom between 2017 and 2018.
The general overview here is that, over time, in 2018, there has been a significant increase in the financial situation of the budget of 318.6
million
pounds
. However
, in 2017, the percentages of money the cops expended were earning.
According to
the data, in 2017, in each area of the group, such
as national government, local taxes and Other places, there were most popular financial situations, such
as 175.5, 91.2, and 38 million
pounds
the ratio was 304.7 million
pounds
, However
, In 2018, the proportion of allocation were elite such
as 177.8, 102.3 and 38.5 million
pounds
, moreover
, the ratio was 318.6 million
pounds
.
Furthermore
, in 2017, the percentage of expenditure in each group by constable increased dramatically, such
as earning, building and transport, In contrast
, In 2018, the proportion of allocation expended increased, as essential as at earning, building and transport.Submitted by chalermchartbsc on
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