The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the money spent and gained by a children's charity within one year. Each type of donation and expense is shown by a particular percentage. It can be clearly seen that the money amount almost coincides with the expenses. It might be concluded that both the income and the expenditures were firmly connected to each other.
According to
the provided data, the major source of revenue was Donated Food, nonetheless
, the others are also
worth to mention
. Change the verb form
mentioning
For instance
, the second place was taken by Community Contributions and the third one by Program Revenue. As for the expenses, there were only three main positions, such
as Program Services, to which expenditures were the most drastic, Fundraising, and Management and General.
Delving into more details, Donated Food comprised 86.6% of all revenue sources as
Change preposition
apply
the
second place, Community Contributions Correct article usage
apply
was
only 10.4%. The expenditures generally consisted of Program Services (95.8%), Fundraising (2.6%), and Management and General (1.6%).Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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