The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years
The chart displayed the
tonnes
of waste
which three companies produced from 2000 to 2015.
It is clear from the graph that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste
between these factories over the period
. Company
A and B had high levels in the year 2000, however
, their waste
tended to reduce lately. Compared with Company
C, the lowest producing waste
one at the beginning of the period
, their amounts of waste
kept rising until the end of the period
.
Company
A put out 12 tonnes
of waste
in 2000, but after that, their waste
level dropped constantly to approximately 8 tonnes
in 2015. This
happened the same for Company
B, after going up by 2 tonnes
from 2000 to 2005, they experienced a sharp decrease by
around 7 Change preposition
of
tonnes
the rest of the period
.
By contrast
, over the period
of 15 years
Add a comma
years,
Company
C remained raising their waste
from 4 tonnes
in 2000 to 10 tonnes
in 2015.Submitted by duyuyen18 on
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