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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years
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The chart displayed the
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 which three companies produced from 2000 to 2015. It is clear from the graph that there were significant changes in the amounts of
waste
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 between these factories over the
period
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.
Company
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 A and B had high levels in the year 2000,
however
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, their
waste
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 tended to reduce lately. Compared with
Company
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 C, the lowest producing
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 one at the beginning of the
period
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, their amounts of
waste
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 kept rising until the end of the
period
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.
Company
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 A put out 12
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 of
waste
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 in 2000, but after that, their
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 level dropped constantly to approximately 8
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 in 2015.
This
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 happened the same for
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 B, after going up by 2
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 from 2000 to 2005, they experienced a sharp decrease
by
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 around 7
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 the rest of the
period
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.
By contrast
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, over the
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 of 15
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Company
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 C remained raising their
waste
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 from 4
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 10
tonnes
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 in 2015.

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