The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years
The chart displayed the
tonnes
of
waste
which three companies produced from 2000 to 2015. It is clear from the graph that there were significant changes in the amounts of
waste
between these factories over the
period
.
Company
A and B had high levels in the year 2000,
however
, their
waste
tended to reduce lately. Compared with
Company
C, the lowest producing
waste
one at the beginning of the
period
, their amounts of
waste
kept rising until the end of the
period
.
Company
A put out 12
tonnes
of
waste
in 2000, but after that, their
waste
level dropped constantly to approximately 8
tonnes
in 2015.
This
happened the same for
Company
B, after going up by 2
tonnes
from 2000 to 2005, they experienced a sharp decrease
by
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around 7
tonnes
the rest of the
period
.
By contrast
, over the
period
of 15
years
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years,
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Company
C remained raising their
waste
from 4
tonnes
in 2000 to 10
tonnes
in 2015.
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