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The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts give information about
exports
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 both from
Vietnam
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 to the US and from the US to
Vietnam
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 in millions of dollars.
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, the largest proportion
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exports
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 from
Vietnam
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 to the US is Coffee
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 the biggest export item from the US to
Vietnam
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 is Aircraft parts. In decreasing order, the five main
exports
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 from
Vietnam
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 to the US are coffee, fruit and vegetables, seafood,
rise
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rice
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 and garments. The two largest of these are coffee and fruit and vegetables, consisting of $23
million
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 and $16
million
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 respectively. The other items are all worth significantly less, with seafood and rice both at around $
4million
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4 million
 and garments making up $
2million
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2 million
. Another $
2million
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2 million
 comes from other items. From the US to
Vietnam
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, aircraft parts bring in substantially more money than all other categories, at $
72million
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72 million
.
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, the next largest
exports
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 are other and machinery at $35
million
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 and $30.5
million
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 respectively. The
exports
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 which provide the least money are fertilizer, cotton and cars which are all
bellow
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below
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 $17
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, vietnam, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
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