Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
It is often believed that the
media
has the authority to publish private Use synonyms
information
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people
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However
, some Linking Words
people
have a negative view of Use synonyms
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, arguing it should be restricted. I partially agree with the latter, for it can violate privacy, making it harder for Linking Words
people
to have a peaceful life regardless of the importance of Use synonyms
media
to expose detailed private Use synonyms
information
, to tell the truth.
On the one hand, the Use synonyms
media
should have a right to reveal private Use synonyms
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to promote the understanding of the public. Use synonyms
In other words
, the exact location and background of a person should be made accessible so Linking Words
people
have a clearer sense of a situation to make better decisions. Use synonyms
For instance
, an article on the family background of a notorious Japanese politician called Saito, who is spoiled by his wealthy relatives, has made it easier for many Linking Words
people
to understand his rude and self-centred acts that cause a number of troubles to others. Use synonyms
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
allows Linking Words
people
to understand the very root of problems to make a fair evaluation of the suitability of the person working as a mayor.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
media
should be controlled when it exposes private Use synonyms
information
to the public because it draws excessive attention, preventing Use synonyms
people
from having an ordinary life. Indeed, it often causes serious troubles not only for a person but Use synonyms
also
for his or her relatives and even neighbours when details of personal life are published by the Linking Words
media
. To illustrate Use synonyms
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, parents were forced to stay at home when their son was arrested for drink and driving which killed three lives in Japan in 2018 Linking Words
due to
the crowds of reporters and strangers with curiosity visiting their place. In spite of them being innocent themselves, they still live under unknown threats, suffering from intense pressure since their privacy is not sufficiently protected.
In conclusion, I somewhat agree that the right of Linking Words
media
should be restricted so as not to harm the lives of innocent Use synonyms
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Nevertheless
, it is often expected to reveal the private lives of important Linking Words
people
including politicians to encourage the public to make fair decisions.Use synonyms
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