The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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In terms of physical appearance, characteristics of the

island

around

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250 by 80 meters and

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is surround

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surround

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by the sea. On the

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westside,

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westside

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west side

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there is

sandy

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a sandy

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small

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apply

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sandy beach and in the middle of

island

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the island

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have

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a large flat area. With reference to vegetation on the left

side

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there are palm trees

stick

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together but towards the east

side

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there is a group of numerous coconut trees. The second map describes the changes that are made to develop tourism. There have been two key types of improvement

achieve

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this

purpose.

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they upgrade by

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reception

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a reception

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and accommodation

restaurant

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restaurants

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connect to the resort. The second on the beach

have

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swimming

sailing

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and sailing

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recreation.

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encouraging sailing as a sport, the pier

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makes it easier to access

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the resort. In my own opinion, I believe

with

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the improvements will make many visitors

interesting

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interested

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this

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in this

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island

and want to come to stay here. That will make

this

island

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economy expand.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

159 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

In modern societies, it is possible for people to go shopping, work and communicate via the internet without face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if the wish. Discus both these views and give your opinion.

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

Some people believe that it is a waste of time ot read read newspapers and watch news on televison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?