The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The provided line graph illustrates how the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean changed over a 7-year period. Units are measured in millions of visitors.

Overall

, what stands out from the graph is that total numbers increased gradually but quite dramatically. Moving to a detailed analysis, the figure for those staying on the island was higher than that for visitors staying on cruise ships. After an initial levelling off in 2011, the former saw a steady growth to exactly 1.5

million

in 2013. Meanwhile, the latter has remained unchanged by 2012, with a small rise to 0.5

million

. The indicators for visitors staying on the island reached a plateau that lasted from 2013 to 2017 except for an insignificant dip in 2016.

On the other hand

, there has been a surge to precisely 2

million

in number of tourists who stayed on cruise ships by 2017, being higher than the former by a margin of 0.5

million

. With regards to the total, in the beginning, the total numbers accounted for 1

million

Subsequently

, they soared to approximately 2.75

million

, being stable between 2015 and 2016, at the same level.

However

, a considerable rise of 0.75

million

has been experienced towards the end of the period.

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peak
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upward trend
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