The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.
The given chart illustrates
changing
numbers of crimes that happened in three Panama City areas throughout the Correct article usage
the changing
year
2010 to 2019.
It can be seen that there are 3 kinds of crime Fix the agreement mistake
years
commited
in the city which are, burglary, car theft, and robbery. Correct your spelling
committed
Although
burglary marked the highest number of cases in 2010, it is obvious that it has
Wrong verb form
had
major
decrease in 2015 and ended as the second lowest Add an article
a major
numbers
in 2019 whilst car theft and robbery remained relatively stable until 2019.
Fix the agreement mistake
number
To begin
with, burglary marked the highest number around 3400 incidents in 2010, 1 year later those number
slightly Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
having
Verb problem
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
rise
but dramatically Replace the word
rose
plunge
to around 1000 incidents in 2015 Wrong verb form
plunged
then
it relatively steady thereafter
. Similarly
, hijacking of cars was the second-rated unlawful act of 2010 at approximately 2900 incidents, stayed the same for two years, then
dropped sharply to a little above 2000 in 2013, and fluctuated around that range until it grew marginally to roughly 2800. Notably, accounted for the leading issue of 2019.Submitted by pocutarifahzahrina on
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