The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.
The given chart illustrates
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numbers of crimes that happened in three Panama City areas throughout the
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2010 to 2019. It can be seen that there are 3 kinds of crime
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in the city which are, burglary, car theft, and robbery.
Although
burglary marked the highest number of cases in 2010, it is obvious that it
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major
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decrease in 2015 and ended as the second lowest
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in 2019 whilst car theft and robbery remained relatively stable until 2019.
To begin
with, burglary marked the highest number around 3400 incidents in 2010, 1 year later those
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slightly
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but dramatically
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to around 1000 incidents in 2015
then
it relatively steady
thereafter
.
Similarly
, hijacking of cars was the second-rated unlawful act of 2010 at approximately 2900 incidents, stayed the same for two years,
then
dropped sharply to a little above 2000 in 2013, and fluctuated around that range until it grew marginally to roughly 2800. Notably, accounted for the leading issue of 2019.
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