The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates possible areas, where a shopping
centre
could be built in the
Brandfield Correct article usage
apply
city
. As it might be seen, there are only two of them. The map points only
4 big places that may surround the mall, Change preposition
to only
such
as Golf Course and park, Housing Estate
, City
Centre
, and Industrial Estate
.
According to
the urban plan, shown below, the place is located near the Housing Estate
and City
Centre
, making it quite convenient for those who live in the City
Centre
. In addition
, it should be noted that the
location 1 is easily accessible by public transport, making the potential location even more attractive.
As for the second possible place, it is not so far from the Correct article usage
apply
City
Centre
and Industrial State. It is located nearby
the railway, but its' location is not so convenient for those who live in Housing Change preposition
near
Estate
. The place is closer to those who live outskirts of the city
, in suburbs
.Correct article usage
the suburbs
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