The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates possible areas, where a shopping
centre
could be built in
the
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Brandfield
city
. As it might be seen, there are only two of them. The map points
only
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4 big places that may surround the mall,
such
as Golf Course and park, Housing
Estate
,
City
Centre
, and Industrial
Estate
.
According to
the urban plan, shown below, the place is located near the Housing
Estate
and
City
Centre
, making it quite convenient for those who live in the
City
Centre
.
In addition
, it should be noted that
the
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location 1 is easily accessible by public transport, making the potential location even more attractive. As for the second possible place, it is not so far from the
City
Centre
and Industrial State. It is located
nearby
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the railway, but its' location is not so convenient for those who live in Housing
Estate
. The place is closer to those who live outskirts of the
city
, in
suburbs
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the suburbs
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, city, estate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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