You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The map indicates the plan to construct a new shopping mall including areas separate from S1 and S2 the zone in Brandfiled.
Overall
, when comparing these S1 and S2 communities it is clear that
several of the main facilities are located by S1 . While
S2 looks quite a peaceful area in other places it has only one fabrication.However
, both of the areas are near essential transportation.
To begin
with, the City planner will make key buildings surrounding S1. As well as
the city centre is southeast of the Housing estate that is
located north of the Brandfiled. Moreover
, the Golf course and park are in the west of the land.
On the other hand
, as mentioned rivers, roads and railways cut through between two sides. Also
, S2 is near at hand with industrial estate along with
major transportation. In addition
, the south position has not been planned to develop in recent years.Submitted by np.napatping on
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