In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?
These days, there is a concept that in the near future, all private
vehicles
as well as
lorries will be autonomous and individuals instead
of driving them, can use
them as a transportation facility. This
essay will argue that the benefits of driverless
automobiles outweigh their drawbacks. This
essay will first demonstrate that vehicles
that are driven by robots
are much safer and the utilization of these types of facilities could reduce the amount of traffic
in cities
. Then
, it will argue that the fear of replacing humans with robots
will not be valid.
First of all, utilizing autonomous vehicles
in different metropolitans would be better in terms of safety. Since all cars
and trucks are driven by robots
, the number of dramatic driving accidents would be reduced because most robots
do not have human feelings and instead
of making a decision based on natural instinct, they will decide based on live data which are transferred to them online. For instance
, the UAE 2021 has introduced driverless
taxis and only 1% of driving accidents have occurred because of them. Second of all, the traffic
jams which are one of the main issues of big cities
would be reduced drastically. With the reduction of drivers from cars
and buses, they could be designed in a bigger version where more individuals can use
them. As a consequence
, by decreasing the number of private cars
due to
the number of people
who use
them, the heavy traffic
in big cities
would be dropped. For example
, after the UAE has been using driverless
taxis since 2021, the amount of traffic
on big highways has declined by about 65%.
However
, there is a belief that people
in society would be replaced by intelligent robots
if we use
driverless
vehicles
. Some individuals think that if people
put all their trust in machines' decisions, they will dominate over humans and take control but most of the robots
are developed by humans. So, the programmers of machines have always monitored the robots
' decisions and do not let them surpass restricted rules. As a result
, being worried about replacing people
's places in society with robots
will not be valid. For example
, some chatbots have been introduced to help Tesla cars
, however
, the Tesla company always monitors these chatbot functions that work properly.
In conclusion, in the near future, most trucks and private or public vehicles
will be autonomous which is much safer and better in big cities
in terms of reducing the amount of traffic
while
the fear of replacing everything by robots
is not an issue in driverless
vehicles
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Coherence and Cohesion
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