The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in arts events in the same years.
The pie charts compare proportional garments pending in terms of
arts
in 1995 and 2005. The table compares the number of people
in terms of participation in arts
events.
Overall
, the highest expenditure from the government was literature
, whereas
the most participating field by people
was music
.
As pie charts show, in both years, the government spent the most on literature
. While
in 1995, spending on theatre was mediocre, in 2005, this
figure was expanded. Even though in 1995 the least-spent field was music
, in 2005 its index became equal to the visual arts
index.
Regarding the table, the most people
participated in music
at 120,000 in 1995, whereas
the least participated in literature
at 10,000. In 1995, while
the theatre figure was 70,000, the visual arts
index was 5,000. By 2005, the most people
took part in music
events at $150,000, whereas
the most people
took part in literature
at 25,000. The participants in theatre and visual arts
were 95,000 and 14,000, respectively.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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