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The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in arts events in the same years.

The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in arts events in the same years.
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The pie charts compare proportional garments pending in terms of
arts
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 in 1995 and 2005. The table compares the number of
people
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 in terms of participation in
arts
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 events.
Overall
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, the highest expenditure from the government was
literature
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,
whereas
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 the most participating field by
people
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 was
music
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. As pie charts show, in both years, the government spent the most on
literature
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.
While
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 in 1995, spending on theatre was mediocre, in 2005,
this
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 figure was expanded. Even though in 1995 the least-spent field was
music
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, in 2005 its index became equal to the visual
arts
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 index. Regarding the table, the most
people
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 participated in
music
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 at 120,000 in 1995,
whereas
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 the least participated in
literature
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 at 10,000. In 1995,
while
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 the theatre figure was 70,000, the visual
arts
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 index was 5,000. By 2005, the most
people
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 took part in
music
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 events at $150,000,
whereas
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 the most
people
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 took part in
literature
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 at 25,000. The participants in theatre and visual
arts
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 were 95,000 and 14,000, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arts, people, literature, music with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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