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The table shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990,2000 and 2010.

The table shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990,2000 and 2010.
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The table gives information about how many
litres
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 of
milk
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 is
producted
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produced
 per
years
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year
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 in four
counttries
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countries
within
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 1990,2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 had the highest quantity of
litres
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 of
milk
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while
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 Guatemala
registred
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 less rather than others and the production of
milk
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 increased gradually in the given period. Looking at the details,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 examined an increase
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from 1126200 to 11466000
litres
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 between 1990 and 2010
although
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 in 2000 it had decreased slightly to 11155000. Even though Australia had examined an almost amount compared to
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 with 1124600
litres
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 in the first year,
at the end
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 of the given period, that country
registred
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registered
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a significantly
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significantly
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 decrease with 9165000
litres
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 of
milk
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. In Guatemala,
this
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 manufacturing
leveled
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 up moderately by 84000
litres
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 even though it was 26000
litres
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in
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 the beginning of the
givn
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given
 period,
whereas
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 Tanzania
also
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 witnessed a significant
raise
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rise
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with
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from 87000 to 155000
litres
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 in terms of producing
milk
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 in these years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words litres, milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "examined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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