The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
The supplied pie chart indicates the amount of
money
which was spent in the budget on various parts by the United Arab Emirates government in 2000.
A glance at the graph reveals that,
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apply
UAE
spent more Correct article usage
the UAE
money
in
social security and health and personal services than other services like law and order transport and industry etc.
Nearly half of the budget was spent on health,personal services and Change preposition
on
also
social security,respectively 53 billion
and 100 billion
in UAE in 2000.(Which was the highest money
in that year).moreover
,just over a third of money
was invested Add an article
the money
for
education roughly 38 Change preposition
in
billion
in UAE IN 2000.
The United Arab Emirates did not prefer to invest the budget in some sections like transport,law and order,housing,heritage and environment and they comprised a tiny fraction.similary
, following parts like Defence,education and other Correct your spelling
Similarly
expenditure
included small Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
proporation
like 17billion for law and order and 13 Correct your spelling
corporations
billion
for industry,agriculture and employment.Submitted by TUTOO on
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