The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given tables
compares
the satisfactory results from the survey done at the Ashdown Change the verb form
compare
museum
before and after renovation. From the figures it can be predicted that a lot of good changes Capitalize word
Museum
has
occurred as a whooping figure Correct subject-verb agreement
have
in
very satisfied visitors can be seen and per Change preposition
for
cent
of dissatisified
has reduced to 5.
Correct your spelling
dissatisfied
Overall
, it can be seen that before refurbishment 15 per cent
of tourist
rated it as very satisfied but a year after renovation the Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
figured
doubled and people were highly satisfied same can be seen with satisfied customers almost Replace the word
figure
figure
increased by 10 per Correct article usage
the figure
cent
. A great change can
be noticed is the reduction in the bad reviews Correct pronoun usage
that can
dissatisfied
visitors reduced to 15% from 40%.
Correct word choice
and dissatisfied
Furthermore
, number
of people who were highly unsatisfied dropped by 5 per Change the article
a number
the number
cent
and the number of visitors who gave no response remained same
.
Correct article usage
the same
To sum up
, it can be evaluated that a positive change can be seen in reviews after refurbishment.Submitted by sananayyab91 on
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