The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The provided table compares data about the top five nations for international travel in 2012 and 2013.
Overall
, despite France having the most visitors in both years, tourists spent more money in the USA than other countries. It is clear from the data that in 2012, the quantity of visitors from France was the most 83
million
and it increased by just under 85
million
they spent 53.6
billion
dollars
in 2012 and about 56
billion
dollars
in 2013.
Although
the number of tourists in the USA was less than France in both years, they spent approximately 126
billion
dollars
in 2012 and 140
billion
dollars
in 2013. The total of travellers in Spain was 57.5
million
in 2012 and it grew significantly and reached 60.7
million
in 2013 and they spent roughly 56
billion
dollars
and 60
billion
dollars
, respectively. It is interesting to note that
however
the number of visitors in China had a downward trend and it was 57.7
million
in 2012 and 55.7
million
in 2013, the spent money had an upward tendency and it was exactly 50
billion
dollars
and 51.7
billion
dollars
, respectively. The number of tourists in Italy had a minor change and the spent money rose considerably from 41.2
billion
dollars
in 2012 to 43.9
billion
dollars
in 2013.
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  • tourist arrivals
  • influx of tourists
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • infrastructure development
  • revenue generation
  • geographical distribution
  • popular destination
  • regional analysis
  • natural attractions
  • cultural heritage
  • seasonal trends
  • tourism patterns
  • climatic conditions
  • tourism preferences
  • adventure tourism
  • eco-tourism
  • cultural tourism
  • holiday seasons
  • local events
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