The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.

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occured

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occurred

among

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in

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crimes like burglary, car theft,

robbery

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and robbery

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in three different territories in Newport city centre in 9

years

.

Overall

, the

number

of

incidents

in

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of

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burglary fell significantly between 2003 and 2012,

whereas

car theft and robbery fluctuated over the

years

, but kept relatively the same

number

as at the start. From 2003 to 2004, the

number

of

burglary

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burglaries

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reached its peak at 4000, following

wich

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it surged down during the next four

years

. The

number

declined to approximately 1200

of

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incidents

by 2008. After that, a minor fluctuation

have

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started, so in 2012 the

number

of burglaries was

the

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nearly at the same level as in 2004.

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at about 2700

incidents

, car theft has kept the same level for the next 2

years

, when it fell to just above 2000

incidents

. Following that, it

remained

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fluctuating

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, keeping at nearly the same level for the next 6

years

. Just as a robbery over the 9

years

, continued slightly oscillating, reaching 2012 with nearly

same

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the same

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number

of about 600

incidents

.