The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in the industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002

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The charts illustrated the information about time working per week in the industry in four countries France , Denmark , Sweden and The

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in 2002.

Overall

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, Denmark , Sweden and The

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reached the highest

mark

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on the charts in the age

group

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from 36-40.

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, France's

risely

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rise

wisely

trend from the 31-35 life

group

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Firstly

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, Denmark has approximately under 10% from 6 maturity groups 1-14,15-20,21-30,41-45,46-50 and 50+.On

other

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the other

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hand, 31-35 have reached 22% and the highest

mark

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belongs to the 36-40 maturity

group

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with 70%.

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apply

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Sweden fluctuated in the percentage of time working dropped in the first timeline and rose in the middle of the timeline but it declined at

last

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of the timeline with a maximum

mark

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is 80% and the lowest stop dropping to 10%.

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,France saw an increase from 1-14 to 31-35 have a stop at 50% and a decline for a dropped trend from 50% to 45% and at least 9%.

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, The

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started to have a low percentage that only 8% and rose steadily to the highest

mark

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that

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which

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is 7% in the 36-40 life

group

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.At

this

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time , an end trend

become

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becomes

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more extreme but the

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have seen a

steadily increased

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steady increase

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from 15% to approximately 21% in the 41-45 and 60+ life groups

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, mark, group with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

212 words

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