The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in the industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in the industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002
The charts illustrated the information about time working per week in the industry in four countries France , Denmark , Sweden and The
UK
in 2002.
Overall
, Denmark , Sweden and The
UK
reached the highest
mark
on the charts in the age
group
from 36-40.
In contrast
, France's
risely
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rise
wisely
trend from the 31-35 life
group
.
Firstly
, Denmark has approximately under 10% from 6 maturity groups 1-14,15-20,21-30,41-45,46-50 and 50+.On
other
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hand, 31-35 have reached 22% and the highest
mark
belongs to the 36-40 maturity
group
with 70%.
While
,
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Sweden fluctuated in the percentage of time working dropped in the first timeline and rose in the middle of the timeline but it declined at
last
of the timeline with a maximum
mark
is 80% and the lowest stop dropping to 10%.
Secondly
,France saw an increase from 1-14 to 31-35 have a stop at 50% and a decline for a dropped trend from 50% to 45% and at least 9%.
Otherwise
, The
UK
started to have a low percentage that only 8% and rose steadily to the highest
mark
that
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is 7% in the 36-40 life
group
.At
this
time , an end trend
become
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more extreme but the
UK
have seen a
steadily increased
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from 15% to approximately 21% in the 41-45 and 60+ life groups
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