The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The provided diagram shows the layout of the Norbiton industrial
area
at present compared with the planned renovation in the future.
Overall
, there are many facilities and buildings which will be built in the planned layout.
Also
, there will be an expansion to the farmland
area
located in the north of the factory
area
.
To begin
with, all of the factories will be removed from the town, and housing will be constructed
instead
. There is an expansion of the road to the north of the roundabout.
This
road will cross the river and end at the farmland
area
.
In addition
, there will be a playground, houses, and a school along the road from the east of the roundabout.
Furthermore
, the new roundabout will be built in the south of the existing one. A medical centre and shops will be constructed in the south-east and south-west of the main roundabout respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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