A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in order to share my experience regarding the article "The book that influenced me most".

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is all about thinking positively that

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enhancing the good vibes from the surrounding environment ultimately,

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may lead to individual great success.

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, it is the story of a young South Indian boy who belongs to a very small family, who after his father's death becomes totally broken from the inside. But still did not lose any hope and studied a lot.

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that, he did a job in order to pay for the living expenses of his family. Nowadays, the person is known as the missile man of India "APJ Abdul Kalm".

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, his life story turning from being a poor kid to the former President of India made me feel that nobody stays with us every time not even our parents. His character made me so independent. I would advise reading

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book to everyone from children to youth and even older age groups, as it is very beneficial for children's upbringing and teaches that good lessons in a beneficial way.

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Sincerely, Aanchal

aroraaanchal997Mon Mar 06 2023

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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