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Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend. Explain the situation, Say why you will not be attending, Say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work.

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Hello James, Hope you are doing well, I
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 your invitation to the farewell party it is great news that you are getting the next step in your career , it will be a loss for our company to lose a gem like you who is always being proven perfectionist.
Unfortuntely i
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 party I have a
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family emergency my father's health is not going very well these days and am the only one who takes care of him so
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 wont be able to join at
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 moment. I really appreciate the time interval where we worked
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 learned so much and you helped me as well in many projects ,sharing our meals was the best part I will always remember these memories. I would like to see you grow more in the coming years . With warm regards, Shivani.

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tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone, especially in professional correspondence.
grammar
Ensure there are no spelling mistakes, such as 'recevied' and 'i' instead of 'I'.
structure
Consider breaking down longer sentences to improve clarity and readability.
task achievement
You conveyed your reasons for not attending the party well, which shows empathy and a personal connection.
coherence
The ending of the letter expresses good wishes, which adds a positive note to your correspondence.
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