Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend. Explain the situation, Say why you will not be attending, Say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work.

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Hello James, Hope you are doing well, I

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your invitation to the farewell party it is great news that you are getting the next step in your career , it will be a loss for our company to lose a gem like you who is always being proven perfectionist.

Unfortuntely i

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party I have a

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family emergency my father's health is not going very well these days and am the only one who takes care of him so

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wont be able to join at

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moment. I really appreciate the time interval where we worked

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your experience

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learned so much and you helped me as well in many projects ,sharing our meals was the best part I will always remember these memories. I would like to see you grow more in the coming years . With warm regards, Shivani.

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tone

Try to maintain a more formal tone, especially in professional correspondence.

grammar

Ensure there are no spelling mistakes, such as 'recevied' and 'i' instead of 'I'.

structure

Consider breaking down longer sentences to improve clarity and readability.

task achievement

You conveyed your reasons for not attending the party well, which shows empathy and a personal connection.

coherence

The ending of the letter expresses good wishes, which adds a positive note to your correspondence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend. Explain the situation, Say why you will not be attending, Say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

If an individual acts in an anti-social way, such as committing a crime, who is to be blamed: society or the individual. What causes begin such behaviour? Who should be responsible for this?

Write a letter to the hotel manager to inform you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. - Introduce yourself and the group. - Tell about the business meeting. - Inform if accommodation is necessary

some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors. what problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?