The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.

The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.
The two pie charts show the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.
According to
the first chart, the dominant portion of the population was adults between 40 and 59
years
old,
this
figure was 42%.
People
from 20 to 39
years
old were the second largest portion in 2000.
This
figure was 33%.
In contrast
, over 60
years
old
people
and teenagers (0 to 19
years
old) accounted for 25%. In 2050, it is notable that
people
between 40 and 59
years
old will account for 45%, which is expected to be the largest proportion.
However
, the percentage of adults from 20 to 39
years
old will decline by 4% from 2000,
this
figure will be 29%. Interestingly,
people
younger than 20
years
are expected to experience a significant decline, from 15% in 2000 to 7% in 2050,
while
over 60
years
people
are expected to increase by 19% in 2019.
Overall
, two age groups(20-39
years
old and 40-59
years
) are expected to remain stable,
while
the other two age groups ( over 60
years
old and under 20
years
old) will change considerably.
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