The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.

The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.
The two pie charts show the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050.
According to
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the first chart, the dominant portion of the population was adults between 40 and 59
years
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old,
this
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figure was 42%.
People
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from 20 to 39
years
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old were the second largest portion in 2000.
This
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figure was 33%.
In contrast
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, over 60
years
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old
people
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and teenagers (0 to 19
years
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old) accounted for 25%. In 2050, it is notable that
people
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between 40 and 59
years
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old will account for 45%, which is expected to be the largest proportion.
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, the percentage of adults from 20 to 39
years
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old will decline by 4% from 2000,
this
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figure will be 29%. Interestingly,
people
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younger than 20
years
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are expected to experience a significant decline, from 15% in 2000 to 7% in 2050,
while
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over 60
years
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people
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are expected to increase by 19% in 2019.
Overall
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, two age groups(20-39
years
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old and 40-59
years
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) are expected to remain stable,
while
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the other two age groups ( over 60
years
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old and under 20
years
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old) will change considerably.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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