The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia

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The given table illustrates data about marital statuses and average age of bride and groom in 5 different

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from 1960 to 2000.

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, it can be seen that in all categories there is a steady growth during the period except in religious

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. In 1960 civil

marriage

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was only 8000 though

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number has experienced a stable increase in all given

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with 12000 in 1970, 16000 in 1980, 23000 in 1990 and 40000 in 2000. The same pattern has happened for the average age of bride with 21, 23, 25, 27 and 30 from 1960 to 2000.

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, the average age of the bridegroom has seen the same

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24,25,27,30 and 32 respectively for given

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, religious

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in 1960 was 25000 and in 1970 with a slight growth was 28000.

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, there was a jump almost to the double in 1980 with 50000.

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this

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rate decreased to 32000 in 1990 and 34000 in 2000, religious

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in these

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is still more popular than in1960 and 1970.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Evolution
Trend
Cultural shifts
Economic factors
Societal changes
First marriage
Contributing factors
Education
Career opportunities
Societal norms
Personal independence
Gender differences
Disparities
Legal age
Access to education
Implications
Family structure
Childbearing
Population demographics

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The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia

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