The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia

The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia
The given table illustrates data about marital statuses and average age of bride and groom in 5 different
years
from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that in all categories there is a steady growth during the period except in religious
marriage
. In 1960 civil
marriage
was only 8000 though
this
number has experienced a stable increase in all given
years
with 12000 in 1970, 16000 in 1980, 23000 in 1990 and 40000 in 2000. The same pattern has happened for the average age of bride with 21, 23, 25, 27 and 30 from 1960 to 2000.
Also
, the average age of the bridegroom has seen the same
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24,25,27,30 and 32 respectively for given
years
.
On the other hand
, religious
marriage
in 1960 was 25000 and in 1970 with a slight growth was 28000.
However
, there was a jump almost to the double in 1980 with 50000.
Although
this
rate decreased to 32000 in 1990 and 34000 in 2000, religious
marriage
in these
years
is still more popular than in1960 and 1970.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Evolution
  • Trend
  • Cultural shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Societal changes
  • First marriage
  • Contributing factors
  • Education
  • Career opportunities
  • Societal norms
  • Personal independence
  • Gender differences
  • Disparities
  • Legal age
  • Access to education
  • Implications
  • Family structure
  • Childbearing
  • Population demographics
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