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The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in the year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012.

The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in the year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012.
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The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in their year one assessments in 2008 and 2012.
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, the percentage tends to rise in the next years giving a better result. In 2008, the average pass
rate
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 was lower,
just
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 about half of the
student
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students
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 being able to do it, but by 2012, we will see a significant level of improvement in most cases. A closer look at the data reveals that the percentage rose considerably in some subjects more than others. In 2008, the computer science subject had the best numbers when it came to the passing
rate
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 being at 70%. The second highest
rate
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 was in the health sciences department with a little over 40% being closely followed by maths and engineering.
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, despite the average results in the other areas, only 4% of the
student
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 could pass humanities being the lowest on the chart.In 2012, the computer science field will continue to be in the lead, with
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 of just over 80%,
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 the health science area is only half of it without improvement from the
last
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 year. By far the highest increase is visible in the business field with almost
30
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% difference coming as the
third best
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 outcome
rate
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, being exceeded by the math and engineering
subject
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subjects
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.
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 there are not many changes in the
last
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 4 years we still have a lot of impactful growth showing higher quality.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compares" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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