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The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.

The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
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The line graph describes the average time how four car companies that make cars in their US manufacture. In general, there was a significant decrease in the time spent by all vehicle companies. General Motors manufacturers decreased the average hours the most from 32 hours per vehicle (
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) in 1998 to 22
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 in 2005.
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 the average time spent by Ford increased from 28
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 in 1998 to approximately 31
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 in 2001,
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 dropped to approximately 21,8
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 in 2005. Speaking of Toyota and Honda manufacturers,
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 both had the same
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 at the beginning. But in 1999 Toyota slightly rose from 22
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 to 23
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 before
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 decreased to 22
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 fluctuated up and down before
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 to 20
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 in 2005.
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, in 1999 Honda decreased to 20
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 before
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 continuously increased from 20
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 in 1999 to approximately 24
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 in 2002.
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, there was a remarkable decrease from 24
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 in 2002 to 20
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 in 2005.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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