As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People
are nowadays leaving the newspaper as the internet grows its attention among society. This
essay agrees with this
notion because newspapers
are not as convenient as gadgets, and they also
require a lot of processes to produce.
First of all, people
are shifting their use of newspapers
to gadgets which is
easier to use and provide more reading materials. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
This
is, indeed, because of the internet which enables us to access thousands of subjects, with any personalization in terms of the category, the type of text, and many more. For instance
, if we are in the mood of reading
novels, we can search it on Google, with a simple "reading novel" as the keyword, we will get a hundred options and we can sort them based on our preferences
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for read
Secondly
, compared to online reading, newspapers
need to go through several processing steps before they can be distributed to readers. Initially
, the journalist will sort information that they perceive as good, and then
review the news and pass it to the logistic department to print all the selected news, not to mention
the Quality Check which can reject the printed newspaper. On the other hand
, reading with gadgets only requires one device and you can enjoy reading information. For example
, you can search "free books" in Google and you have all the topics that you desire.
In conclusion, I believe that in time, newspapersnewspaper
will only be a history because more Correct your spelling
newspapers
people
utilise the internet for reading. Furthermore
, newspapers
are not suitable for people
's need of practical use, and they also
undergo many complicated steps to produce.Submitted by 000silr111 on
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