The line graph provides the number of people using Paris metro station over a given days.

The line graph provides the

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of people using

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metro station over a given

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. At 8 a.

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. the

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of people rises sharply

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morning reaching a peak of 400.After there is a steady drop to 300 at 9 a.

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. and less than 200 at 10 a.

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.Between 10 and 11 a.

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there is a slight upward trend,

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between 12 noon and 2

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. the

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remained stable below 300.In the afternoon there is a decline in

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of passengers using the station about 80 at 4

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. The evening brings a growth from 200 at 5

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.

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to almost 400 at 6.

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of people

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slightly after 6

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.

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,afterwards goes into free-fall quickly to 120 at 8. After a small rise at 9,it ends up with a downfall to 120 at 10 o’clock again.

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,the greatest

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of passengers could be seen in the station in the early morning and

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in the early evening.