The line graph provides the number of people using Paris metro station over a given days.

The line graph provides the

number

of people using

Paris

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the Paris

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metro station over a given

days

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day

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. At 8 a.

m

. the

number

of people rises sharply

in

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the

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morning reaching a peak of 400.After there is a steady drop to 300 at 9 a.

m

. and less than 200 at 10 a.

m

.Between 10 and 11 a.

m

there is a slight upward trend,

however

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however,

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between 12 noon and 2

p.

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p.m.,

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m

. the

number

remained stable below 300.In the afternoon there is a decline in

number

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a number

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of passengers using the station about 80 at 4

p

.

m

. The evening brings a growth from 200 at 5

p

.

m

to almost 400 at 6.

Further

,the

number

of people

reduce

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slightly after 6

p

.

m

,afterwards goes into free-fall quickly to 120 at 8. After a small rise at 9,it ends up with a downfall to 120 at 10 o’clock again.

Overall

,the greatest

number

of passengers could be seen in the station in the early morning and

also

in the early evening.