Topic: The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projection for 2055.

The supplied pie charts illustrate the expected changes in

populations

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the populations

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of two countries

including

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Oman

and

Spain

in 2005 compared to 2055.

Overall

;

pie

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the pie

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charts incorporate three generations

such

as 0-14 years, 15-59 and

60

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60+ years

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with

60

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60+ years

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being the most common in both countries. As can be seen, the percentage of

60

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60+ years

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were

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48% in

Oman

in 2005

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it will be increased to 57% in 2055. The opposite is true for

Spain

,

in other words

, the proportion of

this

group was 62% in the past;

however

, it will be decreased to 46% in 2055. Generally speaking, there is no doubt that the

60

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60+ years

+years

contains the most capacity of each pie

charts

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. It is clearly shown that

,

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there will be remarkable changes in 15-59 years in

Oman

and

Spain

with

2

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a 2

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% increase for the former and 18% growth for the latter in 2055.

Furthermore

, the most reduction will occur in 0-14 years in

Oman

from 48% in 2005 to 37% in 2055.

Similarly

,

Spain

will experience the same pattern from 14% to 12% in 2005 and 2055 respectively.