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The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
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The pie charts illustrate survey results on
satisfaction
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 levels of IT support facilities and current opening
hours
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 in a university.
Overall
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, most part-time and full-time
students
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 are fulfilled with both services,
while
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 a few of them are the reverse. Looking
further
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, 87% of full-time and 70% of part-time
students
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 are deeply content with the current opening
hours
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. Full-time
students
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also
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 show their positive feedback towards IT support accounting for 54% of informants,
whereas
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 part-time learners contribute only 20%.
Furthermore
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, over a quarter of all respondents express moderate
satisfaction
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 with the IT support service, made up for 31% of full-time and 35% of part-time
students
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.
Conversely
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,
this
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 level of
satisfaction
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 with current opening
hours
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 among
students
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 is notably lower, particularly among part-time
students
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 (23%) compared to full-time
students
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 (12%).
Additionally
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, a bitterly dissatisfying service among part-time
students
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 is shown in the provision of current opening
hours
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 (45%), and 15% of the other types of respondents say so. Meanwhile, the other facility successfully gives
satisfaction
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 to
students
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 of all types; 1% of full-time and 5% of part-time learners express unsatisfactory responses.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction, hours, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "express" was used 2 times.
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