The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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analytic report provides information pertaining to the various stages in the production of sugars which originate from sugarcanes.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the process of making sugars from sugarcanes is fairly complex and involves 7 main steps.
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, the production of sugars commences with
sugarcane
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's development and culminates with drying and cooling. The most logical point to start at is planting a
sugarcane
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which takes approximately between 12 and 18 months to mature. After the
sugarcane
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is fully developed, it is harvested by traditional or mechanical metrics. In the manual method, the farmer removes the leaves and cuts the
sugarcane
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with a knife
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the mechanized way uses a special machine to cut and crop directly. Once harvesting has been completed, the
sugarcane
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is passed through another machine that crushes from canes to liquids known as juices. Eventually, the juice is purified by a limestone filter before it is put in an evaporator where heat is supplied to change the juice into syrup.
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stage, a centrifuge separates the crystals from the syrup.
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, separated crystals are dried and cooled to get the final product which is ready to be sold.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Harvesting
  • Transporting
  • Processing plant
  • Washing
  • Crushing
  • Boiling
  • Concentration
  • Purification
  • Crystallization
  • Cooling process
  • Packaging
  • Distribution
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
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