The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the comparison among the median amount of time ungraduated learners spent in study purposes in five distinct colleges on weekdays and
at
weekends.
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Overall
, the plenty of hours students Linking Words
utilized
to learn during weekdays more than during weekends. Wrong verb form
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Additionally
, students in Linking Words
university
C spent time studying the most, Use synonyms
whereas
in the second chart, led by institution A.
Regarding the first graph, the statistics of all schools were quite similar, ranging from 9,6 to 10,6 hours. The highest point belonged to Linking Words
University
A Use synonyms
while
the opposite was true for College D. Linking Words
However
, in the second chart, one turned into the third and one was still the leader in the same order.
Turning to the three remaining materials, institution B remained unchanged the second one at 10.1 on weekdays and at 8.6 at the weekends Linking Words
while
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university
E was the third in two charts at 10 and 6,2 respectively. In terms of Use synonyms
university
A, which led the first place at 9.Use synonyms
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