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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes.
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bar chart illustrates how much
tea
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 and
coffee
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 is imported from four developed countries.
Overall
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, the United States was the biggest importer of
tea
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 among the four countries,
whereas
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 Canada and the United Kingdom had the lowest figures for
tea
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 and
coffee
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 imports. The largest proportion of the imported
tea
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 and
coffee
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 was allocated to the UK, totalling 160,000
tonnes
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, which is closely followed by the USA (just below 120,000
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).
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, the amount of
tea
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 imports by Germany and Canada declined, the former was four times less than the leading country in the chart, and the latter was 20,000
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. In terms of imported
coffee
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 figures,
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 Germany witnessed the highest purchases, the United Kingdom ranked
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, importing about half the other countries.
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, the USA and Canada experienced the same exact number, which was 4000
tonnes
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • import quantities
  • tonnes
  • overall trends
  • significantly more popular
  • notable similarities or differences
  • cultural preferences
  • climate
  • economic factors
  • highlight
  • describe
  • compare
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