The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chars show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chars show how it was distributed.
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The two pie charts illustrate the aftermath of surveys among the guests who visit the museum. Meanwhile, it is a comparison between the former and the later years about
people
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's feedback.
Overall
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, before transformation,
people
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who were dissatisfied had a lion's share.
Although
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no response from visitors is constant in before or after.
However
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, more
people
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are very satisfied with the changes. Looking at the pie charts, it is crystal clear that previously the majority of
people
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were dissatisfied 40% and later the ratio declined to 15%.
Whereas
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, very satisfied surged to double 35% as in the past it stood at 15% and no response from tourists has recorded the same percentile of 5%
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both
in both
years. Moving towards the rest of the information, satisfaction was 30% before transforming the museum as it climbed dramatically to 10%.
People
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who were very dissatisfied were 10% and after some development.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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