The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the comparative proportions of the annual total school
expenditure
in some selected schools in The UK in 1981 and 1991.
Overall
, teachers' salaries
had the lion's share of the school spending in both years, increasing over the next ten years. While
the percentages of spending on other workers' salaries
and resources from the whole spending rose during the period shown, the level of expenditure
on furniture and equipment fell considerably.
In 1981, 40% of the total school spending allocated
to the teachers' Add a missing verb
was allocated
salaries
which made the greatest percentage. Moreover
, the proportion of expenditure
for
resources was as same as that of furniture and equipment. Change preposition
on
While
other workers' salaries
was
responsible for 28% of the total expense, 2% of Change the verb form
were
whole
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the whole
expenditure
was for the insurance costs.
Over the next ten years, the spending on the teachers' salaries
remained as the highest percentage of spending, comprising the
half of the total spending in schools. Correct article usage
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Although
the spending on the
resources showed an increase of 5% to 20% in 1991, the percentage for furniture and equipment experienced a significant decrease to 5%. Correct article usage
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According to
the pie charts, other workers' salaries
had 22% of the total spending in 1991, as compared to to
28% of that in 1981. Remove the redundancy
apply
Whereas
the spending on the
insurance increased to 2%, it remained as the item with the lowest Correct article usage
apply
perentage
among other items.Correct your spelling
percentage
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